A collaborative Story from 'Our Stories with Stephen' class response to Once Upon a Jar by Reception students, Murray Bridge North Primary School, 2023.
Well there was a little boy called Jeremy and a little girl called Elemny and they used to play all day together in their cubby house and one day they found themselves right out to sea in the ocean, bobbing along in their cubby house.
Jeremy woke up and looked out the window and said to Elemny “wake up Elemny. Wake up. Look out the window”. Elemny looked and there was ocean as far as they could see and she said “where are we, where are we Jeremy?” “We must be on the ocean Elemny. I wonder how did we get here?” “The wind must have blown us out here onto the ocean”, said Elemny.
Then Elemny said “I’m hungry”, and Jeremy said “what do you want to eat?” “Lemons”, she said. Jeremy said “I don’t know if there are any lemons in the ocean” but Elemny said “they are in the shells”. So the two of them dived into the ocean and found some shells and they brought them back to the bobbing cubby and when they looked in the shells all the lemons came out, all the lemons you want. And they started to eat them but they were too sour and Jeremy went blooouugh and back out came a half eaten lemon. But suddenly a fish came out of the sea, slurped up the thrown up lemon and jumped back into the ocean.
Jeremy got an idea. He thought I like to eat fish why don’t we blooough - throw up again and get these disgusting fish and so Elemny threw up a lemon and along came a disgusting fish and they grabbed it before it jumped back in the ocean. Then they put the disgusting fish on a fishing line and they threw it in and caught a much bigger fish. Then they made a fire and they cooked the big fish and had some dinner.
After that they began to wonder “but how are we going to get back to land” and just as they were wondering about it, the wind started blowing again and blew them back to land.
The End.